Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, August 14, 2018
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi there, my name is Ariana Craig and I am a student at
ReplyDeleteOhaeawai Primary School. I really like how you have done the color.
It made me think about real unicorns in rainbows.
Have you thought about trying making rainbow unicorns with playdough. What were you learning about unicorns?
If you would like to view my learning, my blog is
http://osarianac.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteI liked it because there was a rocket ship and a unicorn.
Did you know I like rocket ships and unicorns? Maybe put the unicorn a tiny bit further away from the rocket ship.
Hi there, my name is Heidi and I am a student at
ReplyDeleteOhaeawai Primary School. I really like how you created the unicorn.
It made me think about how you were the person and the unicorn was your pet.
Have you thought about making a google draw instead of doing a slide if you are going to use one slide. If you would like to view my learning, my blog is
http://osheidih.blogspot.com