Once there was a man who would write every day of his life before he ate his lunch and them one day he start to be sick in his stomach and his mouth was so felt dry he want to go set down in the room and then he said I am in Invisible oh no he said I don't want to go to School this week I am to go in the class because my class can say haaaaaaaaaa and all the whole School said it to. The principal said next week we well have a important meeting with the new teacher with a ice cream machine for the kids and the teacher.
Tuesday, April 13, 2021
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Kia Ora Savannah!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Fau and I am a YR 8 student at Panmurew Bridge School. Wow, interesting story! Is this perhaps a narrative? I liked how you told us that the main character turned into an invisible man. What happened after the school meeting?
A little bit more information would've been better to help me understand, but you did a good job.
Keep it up!
Fau
Kia Ora Savannah,I really like how you were very descriptive with your story. But Next time you should reread your writing to make sure that what you are writing makes sense.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favorite part of the story?
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Emma
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